View Full Version : ¨˜”°º•Shawns Peotry•º°”˜¨
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 08:58 PM
I did it again, just when i thought i was done
I picked up the knife and my body went numb
I don't know where the pain is coming from
It just hurts everywhere, seeing what life has become
I thought I was done and I could move on
But once again I guess I was wrong
The blade just keeps getting thrust into my skin
From the violent thoughts boiling within
And I can't put it down no matter how hard I try
There's still something inside that tells me I can't say good-bye
I'm not ready to let go just yet
The scars arn't something I can just forget
And just when i thought i was done
I picked up the knife and my body went numb
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 09:03 PM
This one i wrote about 1 year ago.. when i was thinking of my girlfriend... took me ages lol
Each day starts,
With a merging of two hearts,
When I'm with you.
Every moment seems to last,
And at the same time go so fast,
When I'm with you.
The two of us cognate an eclipse,
Each time you kiss my lips,
When I'm with you.
Nothing but love floods my soul,
And makes me give up all control,
When I'm with you.
But now everything looks faded,
And my heart feels degraded,
Cause I'm not with you.
b_v_d
11-11-2003, 09:05 PM
thats some mighty homosexual "peotry" there shawn lol
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 09:08 PM
if you don`t like the one i loads more... i use to write them alot... each poem took me like 1 month to write
Tanya
11-11-2003, 09:20 PM
OK I Said U Were A Poet BUT Isn't This Taking It A Lil Bit 2 Far??LoL
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 09:48 PM
damn!! i just found this poem with my other poems . i made it when i was 17 about 4 years back i made this when i was at collage lunchtime break... let me know what you think.
hate is beautiful
the color black
it smells like death
when it is fresh
it tastes like blood
so warm and sweet
it sounds like screams
a song to my ears
it feels like torture
the wonderful pain
it looks like a winters day
so cold and welcoming
hate is a close friend
so loving and true
pugamsish
11-11-2003, 10:20 PM
From my website:
im makin wicked decisions about the vicious incisions
that ill inflict in this mission to murder yall wit precision
ive got a sickness sufficient to kill these pricks wit no vision
theyll try to come back hard, but we know those dicks arent efficient
now yall quick to be wishin ya never heard of my name
in this picture perfect murder ill be burnin ya frame
makin turbulence rain wit every word from my brain
no matter how fluidly u flow ur not disturbin my flames
im superb in this game so yall hate my sport
ull try to sound like eminem but come up 8 miles short
or should we wait while court brings an end to ur nirvana
incitin suicidal tendencies that rob u of ur honor
even wit marijuana u cant get higher than me
ur verbal bullets cant penetrate if they were fired at me
so dont aspire to be the winner when i just took ya life
cuz yall couldnt cut my verse if i handed u the knife
KANE_6969
11-11-2003, 10:39 PM
roses are red violets are blue.... shawn is a huge homo...dis and ben are too.. am so good at poetry
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 10:44 PM
thats not poetry
KANE_6969
11-11-2003, 10:53 PM
yes it is
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 10:56 PM
no its not... thats insulting the poetry.
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 11:02 PM
This is another one i found in my collection..i was sitting in my garden looking up in the sky i saw the stars .. they were so beautiful so i decided to write a poetry.
took me 2 months to complete this one lol
Across the stars I tell this tale
about a boy who’s meek and shy,
about the queen who’s young and strong,
Across the stars where lovers lie.
Mere servant boy of seventeen,
he served the royal men to keep
his meals but bumped into the queen,
Across the stars their eyes stared deep
for countless minutes they had stared,
then she instructed secretly
for them to meet against the rules,
Across the stars of destiny!
Then later that night, all asleep,
the queen became a girl, she dressed
in simple clothes to meet her boy
across the stars, her heart confess!
On the tower, the boy was there,
surprised by her simplicity.
But here they met again to seek
across the stars, their destiny!
First curious they so conversed
then deeper shared each other’s soul,
spilled all their wishes, dreams, and heart
across the stars where all was told!
And in this night, their eyes had shared,
and tranquil as a peaceful dove,
their lips had met, first ever kiss
across the stars of tender love.
With passionate with furious
undressing their needless charade,
he entered her with joyful grace
across the stars where love they made!
When finally the morning came,
their hearts and souls traversed above,
but parting can yet never take
across the stars their gift of love!
But soon men’s long time enemy
arrived (and all the peace belied),
bombarding the planet below,
Across the stars where shadows lie.
This boy was called off into war,
to defend his world. In the feast
of solders new, she smiled at him
across the stars of shattered peace.
The men’s defense was a success,
but people wanted justice done,
the boy crossed light years, queen defend
across the stars they fought as one.
A long and deadly war begun,
though fighting brings their lips apart,
the boy would always thus stare back
across the stars to touch her heart.
And though this war, the queen did all
she can to lesson people’s toll,
her heart would always wander far
across the stars to feel his soul.
The enemy defeated, none
had cheered, for home was tainted red
with blood, the queen stood on the crux
across the stars, her home lay dead.
He saw his love and their new child—
all fell except their tower high—
He held their child and her hand
across the stars to watch her die…
shawn
your poetry is trite and obviously contrived
probably the worst case of drivel trying to be passed off as poetry that i have ever seen in my entire life
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 11:06 PM
god.. im just one of those men that love poetry .. if you don`t like it .... you can leave
its pretty much irrelevant tripe that i never want to read again
i enjoy poetry
what i am saying is
those sucked ass
i mean how can you accuse me of not liking poetry when my signature is from a goddamn poem
nice title by the way
lol
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 11:09 PM
ok.. then you can leave.. if you don`t like... no ones forcing you to come in here to read my work
its funny to see what you try to pawn off as poetry
i know i got a good laugh from it
it seems like you dont have a creative or literary bone in your entire body
poetry is an artform and you make it a mockery
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 11:12 PM
lol...ok.
if you want good poetry to learn from then read these and learn something
http://www.bluejo.demon.co.uk/poetry/poems/rol.htm
http://eliotswasteland.tripod.com/
and read paradise lost and the divine comedy
cause you need help with this
KANE_6969
11-11-2003, 11:25 PM
roses are red violets are blue shawn sucks dis small dick and ben tiny pecker too
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 11:26 PM
ok. anyway you gonna tell me that cheat then?
KANE_6969
11-11-2003, 11:28 PM
roses are red violets arebblue shawn sucks hugenigger dick and swallows it too
no im not
ill just criticize youre horrible poems more as soon as you put more up
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 11:48 PM
go ahead .. it not like i care.. i know you are jealous of them
a monkey on speed could piece together more powerful words
$hAWn
11-11-2003, 11:53 PM
hey if i change my title are you going to change it back
KANE_6969
11-12-2003, 12:02 AM
we will leave it alone hahahah..
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 12:12 AM
That it.. fvck you and god.. im had anough of you fvckin nobs.. you want to change my title comon then bring it on... ill fvck show you
b_v_d
11-12-2003, 12:22 AM
Shawn copied most of his poems from readers digest lol
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 12:30 AM
Bullshit those poems i made
KANE_6969
11-12-2003, 12:52 AM
lol@ anal warts.....too bad def wasn;t around in ladder days.. he woulda been fun to talk **** with against dis and shawn and ben ect.
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 12:54 AM
whos def?
Tanya
11-12-2003, 01:11 AM
Shawn I Have Some Poetry That I Wrote I Can Post Sometime...My Style Of Writting Is Def Different To That Of Urs...And Pug Im Sure Ruff Ryders Or State Property Will Be More Then Willing 2 Sign You=-)P
Tanya
11-12-2003, 01:12 AM
O Btw Sweet Title Shawn Lmao
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 01:24 AM
tanya writing poetry is like art... you express the feelings.. i wrote few poetrys that went public... i got huge respond..
but anyway.. it don`t matter as many people think.. that this is all lie.. bvd think im getting them from websites.. lol hell no these are mine.. i just was going trough some paper work and found my old poets.. i wrote ages back.. and thought put them on here. but as you know there are few peeps in here.. going around on the net.. like headless chickens.. asking for trouble
changing my title
talkin sh1t to me
fvck`em i don`t care.. im a survivor.. and i will survive them.
and tanya thank you for laughing at my title.
Tanya
11-12-2003, 08:57 AM
Lmao Sorry But I Know Dis Can Be Contagious.......Just As Herpes Can Be Haha.....It's Just A Title It's Not Like All Existing Life Will End =-)..I Bet You Will Make It....Just Don't Try Taking Limpkinw.com 2 Court 4 Destruction Of Character=-)P
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 09:02 AM
Dis was a friend.. who helped me... thats all..
Tanya
11-12-2003, 09:12 AM
Dis Was An Std I Caught Back In Yahoo Pool......It Was Called The DisBenengitious ......I Was Lucky There Was A Cure 4 It ....I Almost Didn't Survive=)
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 09:22 AM
LmAo.. your funny
**** baby I don't know now. You got STDS ****. Wow ive been clean free and u go and get disbenengitous. Humm let me think about comming over tonihgt. Oh btw Shawn ur poetry aint bad. I just feel you are trying to hard. I really like it but it seems like your trying to make yourself out to be more then you are, think it would work better if u wrote how u knew u could and it would sound better/.
KANE_6969
11-12-2003, 12:08 PM
ewwwww
Tanya
11-12-2003, 06:57 PM
*The User Tanya Has No Comment At This Time* Try Again Later*----Beep----
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 09:55 PM
Today is filled with anger, fueled with hidden hate.
Scared of being outkast, afraid of common fate.
Today is build on tragedies which no one want's to face.
Nightmares to humanity and morally disgraced.
Tonight is filled with Rage, violence in the air.
Children bred with ruthlessness cause no one at home cares.
Tonight I lay my head down but the pressure never stops,
knowing that my sanity content when I'm droped.
But tomorrow I see change, a chance to build a new,
build on spirit intent of heart and ideas based on truth.
Tomorrow I wake with second wind and strong because of pride.
I know I fought with all my heart to keep the dream alive.
Tanya
11-12-2003, 11:21 PM
That's One Is Actually Good Shawn , Wut Site Did You Find It On?=-) j/k
$hAWn
11-12-2003, 11:43 PM
Tell me baby are you lonely? Don't wanna rush ya
I can help ya if ya only, let me touch ya
If I'm wrong love tell me, cause I get caught up
and the life I live is Hell see, I never thought I'd see
the day when I would calm down, you ain't heard
I've been known to clown and Get Around, that's my word
See you walkin and you lookin good, yes indeed
Got a body like a sex fiend, you're killin me
witcha attitude to match right, don't be phony
cause I hate when you act like, you don't know me
I've be stressin in the spotlight, I want the fame
but the industry's a lot like, a crap game
Ain't no time for commitment, I gotta go
Can't be wit you every minute miss, another show
And even though I'm known for my one night stand
I wanna be an honest man, but temptations go...
$hAWn
11-13-2003, 12:13 AM
Finger tips on the hips as I dip, gotta get a tight grip, don't slip
Loose lips sink ships, it's a trip
I love the way she licks her lips, see me jocking
Put a little twist in her hips cause I'm watching
Conversations on the phone til the break of dawn
Now we all alone, why the lights on?
Turn 'em off, time to set it off, get you wet and soft
Something's on your mind, let it off
You don't know me, you just met me, you won't let me
Well if I couldn't have it (silly rabbit) why you sweating me?
It's a lot of real G's doing time
Cause a groupy bit the truth and told a lie
You picked the wrong guy baby if you're too fly
You need to hit the door, search for a new guy
Cause I only got one night in town
Break out or be clown, baby doll are you down?
I get around
KANE_6969
11-13-2003, 09:52 AM
sahwns onlygame is poetry hehoeps tanya willf all madlyinlove withhim cuz he thinks he can write.. then he talk **** to me like he a bad man.. he a bad man without balls to back his talk
$hAWn
11-13-2003, 10:15 AM
Twenty-one gun salute, dressed in fatigue, black jeans and boots
Disappeared in the crowd, all you seen was troops
This little ***** named kane thinks he live like me
Talkin bout he left the hospital took five like me
You living fantasies, ***** I reject your deposit
We shook def punk ass, now we out of the closet
Mobb Deep wonder why ***** blowed them out
Next time grown folks talk, ***** close your mouth
Peep me, I take this war **** deeply
***** Your not Scary
KANE_6969
11-13-2003, 10:47 AM
do you think your a thug or something. your a preppy white kid who can;t get laid. you have no idea of the struggles teh streetz bring you use my name likyou no me.. son you dunno ****.. and since you mention war...you may say inot scary and rightnow i;m not trying to be scary. when i try to be scary those who feel teh wrath run and hide away for 2 years... btw welcome back bitch.. this is liek a reunionbig of you to face yoru maker but you still aint got **** on my game...
$hAWn
11-13-2003, 11:13 AM
My seductive introduction
Be specific, still elusive
But exclusives what I give you when I kick it
And I'm still lifted
Niggas can't get with Mr.Wicked
Picture me flipping
My adversaries getting the dick swiftly
Niggas is swinging wild but they styles miss me
You can bring that bitch with your whole click
And still get treated shitty
Business never personal, I'm up before the sun come up
I'm tired
Just a ghetto star
A drop-top double R is what I'm riding
***** if you was half the man your bitch was
Bring your artillery
When you come for me cause we sick thugs
No hesitation when I pull and blast
Cuz Syke was busting
Plus Bo had em ducking screaming get they cash
So...
So now I got the law on me
My phones tapped, so I had to send word through my little homies
Tell them niggas just be here when they pull the trigger
****
This is what you get, for fucking with the wrong *****
***** you ain`t scary
KANE_6969
11-13-2003, 11:24 AM
for your faggatory ways at this site i shall call you ... mini jazz
Tanya
11-13-2003, 11:45 AM
Don't Hate!=-)
KANE_6969
11-13-2003, 01:51 PM
ilove you tanya :P that work?
Tanya
11-13-2003, 05:12 PM
Eros?Agape? Lol
Tanya
11-13-2003, 05:17 PM
L'amour Est un tel Mot Fort. ..........That's ne Pas Etre Si Utilisé Ouvertement. ...
$hAWn
11-13-2003, 09:42 PM
lol the sumo loves u tanya
$hAWn
11-13-2003, 10:29 PM
You fuckin wit niggaz that's insecure, watered down, my **** is pure
Write down my number but don't call me til you sure
I ain't beggin just tryin to relocate between ya legs
Drippin wet, as we experiment in sweaty sex
When you met me you wouldn't let me, and now
you straight beggin to sex me got you undressin to test me and uhh..
Shut me down if ya want, and miss the chance to do it live
When I stroll by, I see that look in yo' eye
You want a *****, but think that you can't have a *****
Don't cheat yourself, instead treat yourself
If you scared go to church, I know it hurts
To find out me and your man be sharin skirts
I hopin you don't take this the wrong way
But your body is bangin got me attracted in a strong way
After a long day of tryin to make my songs pay
Makin love all day against the wall in the hallway
Ya fantasies come alive, ya heart rate
shall increase when we meet up in this dark place
You might think you're happy with him
but that's a lie, so give this Thug a try
I'd rather be ya *****
nothing is funnier than a pasty white brittish guy trying to rap
just thought id bring that up
$hAWn
11-13-2003, 10:57 PM
This British guy can break Dance to
Just thought id bring that up to
thats somehow even more pathetic
if thats possible
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 12:03 AM
What so pathetic about break dancing.. oh wait you would say that won`t you.. not even your fat and ugly and def.. your jealous aswel.. lmao i bet you can`t even move from your fat ass. lmao, what a pathetic life you have.. why you don`t just stop being lazy and get up from your lazy big fat ass and get your self a job or somthin.. instead of wasting your pathetic life on the net.
and changing peoples titles.... how stupid you can get.. i just don`t know.
Tanya
11-14-2003, 12:15 AM
Lol No Comment Mwhahahaha -Hypocrite-?!
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 01:02 AM
Niggas!, isn't just the blacks
also a gang of mutha-fuckas dressed in blue slacks
They say niggas hang in packs and their attitude is shitty
Tell me, who's the biggest gang of niggas in the city
They say niggas like to do niggas,
Throw me in the cuffs with just two niggas
A street walkin' ***** and a beat walkin' ***** with a badge
I had to shoot yah and the pass for the blast take his cash
And bash his head in dump him at the dead in
And that's just his luck
Cause a ***** like me
don't really give a ****
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 08:37 AM
I just wanna **** bad bitches
All them nights I never had bitches
Now I'm all up in that ass bitches
Mad at 'cha boyfriend, aint 'cha?
You'se a bad girl, gotta spank ya
Gotta thank ya for that head clinic
Explicit, hella photogenic
And tell your friends where the dick's at
Where they can get hit and won't get back to they soulmate
Before you kiss 'em use Colgate
"She Swallowed It!" Yeah the bitch took the whole eight
and ran with it, then let Mel-Man hit it
and Hit the Man hit it; damn bitches
Man, this is what I'm talkin about
Chicken-head, chicken-fed, with a dick in your mouth
Out and about with your ***** like it never took place
Tanya
11-14-2003, 11:15 AM
Uhm How Nice .........Niggas & Bitches...I Feel Right At Home....=/
KANE_6969
11-14-2003, 01:40 PM
lol down withe bitchs and hoez like b rad from malibu
leblitzer
11-14-2003, 02:23 PM
Originally posted by $hAWn
I just wanna **** bad bitches
All them nights I never had bitches
Now I'm all up in that ass bitches
Mad at 'cha boyfriend, aint 'cha?
You'se a bad girl, gotta spank ya
Gotta thank ya for that head clinic
Explicit, hella photogenic
And tell your friends where the dick's at
Where they can get hit and won't get back to they soulmate
Before you kiss 'em use Colgate
"She Swallowed It!" Yeah the bitch took the whole eight
and ran with it, then let Mel-Man hit it
and Hit the Man hit it; damn bitches
Man, this is what I'm talkin about
Chicken-head, chicken-fed, with a dick in your mouth
Out and about with your ***** like it never took place
OMG how limp can let u doing that
Tanya
11-14-2003, 06:18 PM
We All Overlook Shawn's Handicap.........
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 06:29 PM
West coast **** *****
Overdosage - imperial pistols ferocious
**** a bitch; don't tease bitch, strip tease bitch
Eat a bowl of these bitch, gobble the dick
Hoes forgot to eat a dick can shut the **** up!
Gobble and swallow a nut up, shut up and get my cash
Backhanded, pimpslapped backwards and left stranded
Just pop ya collar, pimp convention hoes for a dollar
Six-Deuce in a plush, six-deuce impala
Pimpin hoes from Texas to Guatemala
Bitch niggaz paid for hoes, just to lay wit hoes
Relax one night, and paid to stay wit hoes
Captain Save'Em all day (bitch) well save this dick
Bitch *****, you more of a bitch than a bitch
You ain't into hittin pussy, or hittin the switch
You into hittin bitches off of the grip, you punk bitch
Tanya
11-14-2003, 06:32 PM
You Started Off Good But Now Your Sounding Like A Broke Star 2 Be Rapper....Who Hits The Glass Dick Daily=-).....I'm Starting 2 Regret Saying That You Can Write..An Ebonic Speaking Brit? Wut Next ....
leblitzer
11-14-2003, 06:36 PM
woot?
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 06:36 PM
lol sorry tanya.. i love rapping.... its nothing personal... please
except my apologie
Tanya
11-14-2003, 06:52 PM
~w00t w00t~...Ya Btw Nice Title =/
leblitzer
11-14-2003, 06:56 PM
Originally posted by $hAWn
You fuckin wit niggaz that's insecure, watered down, my **** is pure
Write down my number but don't call me til you sure
I ain't beggin just tryin to relocate between ya legs
Drippin wet, as we experiment in sweaty sex
When you met me you wouldn't let me, and now
you straight beggin to sex me got you undressin to test me and uhh..
Shut me down if ya want, and miss the chance to do it live
When I stroll by, I see that look in yo' eye
You want a *****, but think that you can't have a *****
Don't cheat yourself, instead treat yourself
If you scared go to church, I know it hurts
To find out me and your man be sharin skirts
I hopin you don't take this the wrong way
But your body is bangin got me attracted in a strong way
After a long day of tryin to make my songs pay
Makin love all day against the wall in the hallway
Ya fantasies come alive, ya heart rate
shall increase when we meet up in this dark place
You might think you're happy with him
but that's a lie, so give this Thug a try
I'd rather be ya *****
poor niggas
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 06:57 PM
You better back the **** up, fore you get smacked the **** up
That's how we do it on our side
Any of you niggaz from England that wanna bring it bring it
But we ain't singin, we bringin drama
**** you and your motherfuckin mama
We gonna kill all you motherfuckers
Now when I came out I told you it was just about Kane
Then everybody had to open their mouth with a motherfuckin opinion
Well this how we gonna do this
**** Kane
**** Bvd
**** Bad Boy as a staff record label
and as a motherfuckin crew
And if you wanna be down with Bad Boy
Then **** you too
Def, **** you too
All you motherfuckers, **** you too
Alla y'all motherfuckers, **** you die slow motherfucker
My fo'-fo' make sure all y'all kids don't grow
You motherfuckers can't be me or see me
We the motherfuckin Thug Life ridahs West side till we die!
Out here in England we warn ya we'll bomb on you motherfuckers
We do our job
Tanya
11-14-2003, 06:59 PM
Lol Leb That's What Im Saying..;..
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 08:09 PM
Cruisin down the street in my six-fo'
Jockin the bitches, slappin the hoes
Went to the park to get the scoop
Knuckleheads out there cold shootin some hoops
A car pulls up, who can it be?
A fresh El Camino rolled, Kilo G
He rolls down his window and he started to say
It's all about makin that GTA
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 10:38 PM
What you niggaz want? Cause I got it right here
Y'all niggaz front, then I hit you right there
Not really impressed by what niggaz wear
Faggots talk **** but I really don't care
I'm the type of ***** that'll die for the cause
**** what you heard, I will die for my dogs
Ain't scared of **** - will ride in the fog
Same thing but a bigger size than yours
I **** with Drag-On, cause he spits the flame
Drag-On motherfucker don't forget the name
And we all takin over ain't **** the same
If you ain't out that mob ***** quit the game
And ain't no other cats got love for me
Ain't no other cats gon' bust slugs for me
Ain't no other cats gon' shed blood wit me
But my dogs, is gon' be a thug wit me, c'mon!
Tanya
11-14-2003, 10:42 PM
***** ***** niggaaaaaaaaaaaaaa=/ And Im The One From Ny Lol
Tanya
11-14-2003, 10:45 PM
State .......................
youre from the stern homeland
you have alot to live up to
Tanya
11-14-2003, 10:48 PM
Ya ***** ***** ***** Lmao! Man I Don't Ever Wanna See That Word Again ............
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 10:48 PM
lol
Tanya
11-14-2003, 10:51 PM
Don't Laugh *****=-)
if hes tryin to say that that easy e song is his poem im gonna laugh my ass off
Tanya
11-14-2003, 10:56 PM
Lol Go Shawnnnnnnnnnnnn
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:01 PM
My lifes in the fast lane
Thats when I knew I had game
When class came I had hoes
But didnt know they last name
In school, when you niggas was tradin clothes
Me and my niggas was tradin hoes
Like "What they fadin fo'?"
Carry my books you hoe
I had 'em slavin, yo
I get scarred then I played the hoe
Like "Way to go"
Controllin the halls
Holdin a black Mack-11
Under the black leather
Platforms, a hat with a feather
I was so naughty, drivin a gold Audi
All we did was throw parties
And show up with Gold Gotti
Handsome, endsome, I'm the one you ran from
Cuz you could only be the man in the ****
That I was banned from
Make this **** seem easy
Fiends need me
Make the most conceited chick
In this bitch seem sleazy
Pleased at what I'm doin
And to all yall pimp niggas
Pimp on, and I'll see yall at the reunion
Tanya
11-14-2003, 11:03 PM
I Bet You Are Single Huh?........
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:06 PM
Single lmao.. hell no... i have plenty of pussy
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:06 PM
lol... take no notice of that last message.. no im not single why?
notice how ignores me when i point out that he put a rap song in with his own poems
Tanya
11-14-2003, 11:10 PM
Lol I Didn't Ask If You Had Kittens I Asked If You Were Single...Cause I Know If I Heard You Ever Call Me A *Bitch* *Ho* I'd Slap The Ever Lovin **** Outa You=-) ....Maybe Your Girl/Guy/Gurl Likes Your*STYLE*?
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:11 PM
no they are my my poems.. .. the reason they look like the most songs.. coz me and my homies.. we want to be the rappers.. soo so we copy how the reall rappers rap.. this i put up are.. our poems... but 1 or 2.. have been copied from a site... like the last one i put.. this one... i made up 2 months back..i have tones... full of pages of rap songs we made up that all we do is rap lmao
Tanya
11-14-2003, 11:14 PM
Mhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm You Sure ....Im Liking You Less And Less....Your Really Starting 2 Look Like A Fake?!
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:14 PM
no cutie... im not callin you my bitch.... lol... i already have one... you can be if you want lol joke.!
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:15 PM
Fake.. lol naa... soon one day i will be a star rapper.. you watch... we got are own band
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:17 PM
You can call it fake if you want.. i mean it my future.. it don`t really matter what some thinks... so i don`t know.
but these poems we made..
and one day we will be a star.
Tanya
11-14-2003, 11:17 PM
In Rap Isn't it A Group...Band? Gd Wankers@!!!!!!=-)
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:25 PM
Young black Rockerfeller. Hell, a swiss and mozarella.
Pockets sweller, gettin' money like a bank teller.
'Cause a fool and his dough soon split.
So when you come across a fool get all that she be gettin'.
Ladies, get your paper too.
Don't expect for no man to support you.
Keep it true,
'Cause most brothers are raised to decide for the pesos.
My woman is independent, makin' dough by the case loads.
I'mma keep buildin'... make it killing.
Kick back, relax, and grow old with my millions.
That's where it's at. You got drama, I got the gat,
But we're both black so I don't wanna lay you flat.
Instead let's get paper, while it's paper to get.
Private Jet, 600 coupes that I runs if...
I'm livin' on another level that y'all ain't been yet.
Spend a mill, no sweat, water the line with my wet...
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:33 PM
My Mother never let me forget my history
Hoping I was set free chains never put on me
Wanted to be more than just free
Had to know the true facts about my history
I couldn't settle for being a statistic
Couldn't survive in this capitalistic
Government cause it was meant to hold us back
Using ignorant, drugs, to sneak attack
In my community think of unity
But when I charged them, tried to claim immunity
I strike America like a case of hard disease
Panther power is running through my arteries
Try to stop oh boy you'll be clawed to death
Cause I'll be fighting for my freedom with my dying breath
Do you remember that is what I'm asking you?
You think you living free don't let me laugh at you
Open your eyes realize that you have been locked in chains
Said you wasn't civilized and stole your name
Cause some time has passed seem you all forget
There ain't no liberty to you and me we all ain't free yet
Originally posted by $hAWn
Cruisin down the street in my six-fo'
Jockin the bitches, slappin the hoes
Went to the park to get the scoop
Knuckleheads out there cold shootin some hoops
A car pulls up, who can it be?
A fresh El Camino rolled, Kilo G
He rolls down his window and he started to say
It's all about makin that GTA
youre saying you wrote that huh
ok then go here and read
http://www.lyred.com/lyrics/Eazy-e/Eazy+Duz+It/Boyz-n-the-hood+(remix)/
youll have to copy and paste since the whole link didnt go into the anchor
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:48 PM
lmao dude look back my few posts you will see i said.. there are 2 songs i copied.. i got nothing to hinde... rest are mine.. if you thing they not .. proof me wrong
i mean add the (remix)/ at the end after it loads
you would think someone from england would know the english language
i guess not
$hAWn
11-14-2003, 11:52 PM
lmao dude look back my few posts you will see i said.. there are 2 songs i copied.. i got nothing to hinde... rest are mine.. if you think they not .. proof me wrong
go on then proof me wrong i have loads more raps here.. that i made.. ..
$hAWn
11-15-2003, 12:01 AM
ok here this is another i made. proof me wrong if i didn`t
I just wanna **** bad bitches
All them nights I never had bitches
Now I'm all up in that ass bitches
Mad at 'cha boyfriend, aint 'cha?
You'se a bad girl, gotta spank ya
Gotta thank ya for that head clinic
Explicit, hella photogenic
And tell your friends where the dick's at
Where they can get hit and won't get back to they soulmate
Before you kiss 'em use Colgate
"She Swallowed It!" Yeah the bitch took the whole eight
and ran with it, then let Mel-Man hit it
and Hit the Man hit it; damn bitches
Man, this is what I'm talkin about
Chicken-head, chicken-fed, with a dick in your mouth
Out and about with your ***** like it never took place
$hAWn
11-15-2003, 12:02 AM
You can`t can you... Faggot lmao... yeah thats right.... punk ass bitch lol
$hAWn
11-15-2003, 12:10 AM
here another i made.. go def proof me wrong
I smoke a blunt to take the pain out
And if I wasn't high, I'd probably try to blow my brains out
I'm hopeless, they shoulda killed me as a baby
And now they got me trapped in the storm, I'm goin crazy
Forgive me; they wanna see me in my casket
and if I don't blast I'll be the victim of them bastards
I'm loosin hope, they got me stressin, can the Lord forgive me
Got the spirit of a thug in me
Another sip of that drink, this Hennesey got me queasy
Don't wanna earl, young ***** take it easy
Picture your dreams on a triple beam, and it seems
don't underestimate the power of a fiend
To my homies on the block
slangin rocks with your glocks put this tape in your box
When you're runnin from the cops -- and never look back
If they could be black, then they would switch
Open fire on them busta-ass bitches, and Lord knows...
$hAWn
11-15-2003, 12:13 AM
lol def you can`t proof me wrong can you.
lmao you just jealous old fat boy.. that wants to be a rapper..
like i said you can`t be me or see me so sgut the **** up!..
$hAWn
11-15-2003, 12:16 AM
ok prove... whatever... go on then prove me wrong like i said only 2 i copied.. rest are mine.... you only found 1 .. and i wrote about 20 here... go on pick any , and prove me wrong
KANE_6969
11-15-2003, 12:31 AM
hje's B Rad from malibu yall
Tanya
11-15-2003, 12:34 AM
Lol Shhh
$hAWn
11-15-2003, 12:51 AM
Peep the whole scene and whatever's goin on around me
Brain kinda cloudy, smoked out feelin rowdy
Ready to wet the party up, and whoever in that motherfucker
Nasty new street, slugger my heat seeks suckers
on the regular mashin in a black Ac Integ-ra
Cock back, sixty seconds til the draw that's when I'm dead in ya
Feet first, you got a nice gat but my heat's worse
From a Thug to preachin church, I gave you love now you eatin dirt
Needin work, and I ain't the ***** to put you on
Cause word is bond when I was broke I had to hustle til dawn
That's when sun came up, there's only one way up
hold ya head and stay up, to all my niggaz get ya pay and weight up
Damn shawn. How much u cost lol. I know a friend who wants some gay loving. I could hook u 2 up.
Tanya
11-15-2003, 01:42 PM
Lmfao Def?No Mc Shawn Mwhahah
KANE_6969
11-15-2003, 04:11 PM
wow hereally had alot to say. remind me of jazz when hemade like 50 threads withteh same title. he is earning the mini jizz thing well
Tanya
11-15-2003, 05:04 PM
It's From Sucking All That *Refer 2 His Title* Maybe It Knocked His Voice Box Out? *GaG *Gag* Hugss Shawn=-)
KANE_6969
11-15-2003, 07:29 PM
it all makes sense
Tanya
11-15-2003, 09:05 PM
Not Really=/
Zenos
11-15-2003, 09:07 PM
tanya, your an attention whore.
shawn, you need to look in the mirror and maybe that will bring you down to earth.
-kimmie-
11-15-2003, 09:10 PM
blah, haven't posted in forever... i guess im testing or w/e.. lol at " peotry" tho..
actually thats his other name
i changed that a long time ago
he has like 4 ids on here now
KANE_6969
11-15-2003, 10:04 PM
welcomeback kimmie
Tanya
11-15-2003, 11:20 PM
Maybe He Liked It Better?
Tanya
11-15-2003, 11:29 PM
That Was Mine You Stold It See...Nigaa, get your hoodie and your gun cocked.
Rock it till the drum stops.
Hip hop.
Even if my **** flip flop
It probably wouldn't stop.
Talk **** and get socked.
How ya hang em?
Know a realer *****? You could bring him.
If I don't represent the ****,
I'll kick it.
We could sway him.
Huh. As if I know ya.
Then I could show ya.
But if I don't know, I gotta fo' fo' fo' ya.
So, so peep game
At point blank range.
The fame can't change what the game maintains.
Strange. Wind against the grain.
Aw ****. Flick or no flick I trips for no bitch
Copy...By W00t
-kimmie-
11-16-2003, 02:03 AM
lmfao... sorry " shawn " but those lyrics or w/e coupled w/ur sassy title just have me lmfao... just seems like u gotta lot 2 say for someone who sucks a lotta dick? lmfao.. haha .. anyways.. are u gangsta? like really? thuggish ruggish and ****? just wonderin.. holla back :cool:
-kimmie-
11-16-2003, 02:04 AM
oh, and hi back @ kane..
title changing is just so damn fun lol
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 07:32 AM
brithish can;t be thugs they aren;t rough enough
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 09:29 AM
that screen shiot witht hat title are downright frightebning shawn.. didn't dis teach you better? or ben even? come on man thats disgusting your title is you duck dick and you[piostuing shoit abouteww yur gei
kimmie where are you whats new withyou?
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 09:41 AM
um hosw about no.
leblitzer
11-16-2003, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by -$HaWn-
Hey Yo,
Bitch!!!!! You got the number, it's on you to make the call
You know I cum quick; help you re-decorate your walls
Cut your backyard, don't have to act hard to get the cock
And if I'm goin too far, I take it out and wipe it off
and put it back up, and keep going
You tryin to hide it from your husband but I know he be knowin
that your pussy's been tampered with
Did you show him the new trick of how you can make it smoke a cancer stick
You be workin it like a dancer bitch, it's hard on me
Not to give you all of my time, that you wanted
You can give me some head, but keep the breakfast in bed
I'd rather spend my mornin diggin through some records instead
But, tonight, I guess it'd be aight if we can touch bases
Hookup somewhere and exchange some "**** Faces"
I know your man's lookin for ya, he's always tryin to run ya
Don't worry bout me handcuffin gul cause I just wanna..............
.. **** witchu
On the sneak tip, on some creep ****
So whatcha gon' do, ya freak bitch?
You, actin, like you, don't, do, dicks
That's the kinda bitch I hate fuckin wit
Baby was a virgin, that's what she said
So I gave her some Hennesey, she gave me some head
I fucked her on the flo', so I wouldn't mess up my bed
Then Lil' 1/2 Dead put his dick on her head
Take that bitch home, and give her a bone
And give her the number to my cellular phone
Man, she blowin up my pager, the ****'s gettin major
A favor for a favor, this dick is what I gave her
Somethin to go by, and bitches know why
Stuff dick in they mouth, and then I'm out (see-ya!)
Peace Out!
sick *_*
Tanya
11-16-2003, 05:41 PM
Uhm ......Ya That's A Lil 2 Much .............
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 06:29 PM
i got a poem.. this is a touching poem i heard when i was akid.... here goes
here i sit same as ever... took a shawn.. pulled the lever... the toilet flushed... the water flowed... look out world.. its a mother load....
i am so talented ty ty...
Tanya
11-16-2003, 06:45 PM
Uhm How Cute!-/
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 07:09 PM
twinkle twinkle my big bong... take 3 hits and yoru mind is gone... to all those preps that think their cool.. thinkagain cuz stoners rule
Tanya
11-16-2003, 07:54 PM
There's Nuffin Wrong With Preppy people!Lol Gd Stereo Types !=)
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 08:02 PM
:P that was my ditching class poem...i like yourpreppyass tanya :P
Tanya
11-16-2003, 08:14 PM
I Really Dont Consider Myself Preppy Lol Does The A & F Give Me Away?=/
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 08:19 PM
the cheer leader is preppy :P whats a and f?
Tanya
11-16-2003, 11:36 PM
Lol See Even Def Knows
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 11:36 PM
damn i stoned... can't really see the a and f then it would make more sense.. post a pic.. didnt;you havea pic in undies :P post that one it was great
Tanya
11-16-2003, 11:41 PM
Lmao! I Dunno Wut Ur Talking About U Must Have Me Confused With Someone Else Lol
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 11:52 PM
i think it was man she was hot. she is liek top 15 hottest girl iever met easily
KANE_6969
11-16-2003, 11:54 PM
wasn't it jones soda you drank? mmm it was thesexiest drink ever hehehe
-kimmie-
11-16-2003, 11:57 PM
uh not much @ kane... back in school.. still a senior, suffering thru c++ class that i took for " fun " someone kill me, thanks. other than that.. stayin outta trouble. trying to grow up.. im gonna be 23 in feb !.. what about u?
KANE_6969
11-17-2003, 12:01 AM
took the semester off ..nothing really new same ole ****... i got 2 months on you.. and staying out of trouble.. i not very good at that...oh well.. you still with reese?
-kimmie-
11-17-2003, 12:04 AM
no i am not w/reese. although we did have a very good talk tonight. we did break up. i still hold him in high regard. :).. and i missed him a lot too rof.. he was " gone " for a few months.
what are u studying in school? and what site?
-kimmie-
11-17-2003, 12:06 AM
speaking of sites.. i still need a host.. anyone who wants to host me for free, i will allow u to do so. :P
Tanya
11-17-2003, 12:28 AM
Jones Lol How The Hell Do U Remember That!
-$HaWn-
11-17-2003, 04:31 AM
Reflected and disrespected, plus I'm rejected
You're just another rapper, who swears he's makin records
That's what they said - whenever I would walk by
I never tripped though - always kept my head up high
Eventually, I knew that I would find my way
After the darkest night, always comes a brighter day
And some would say, that turned away is all you'll get
I just said, "bet," and never let 'em see me sweat
Cause in the end, I knew that I would have it all
while non-believers, were prayin for my downfall
And some would call, and tell me that they wish me well
but in my heart, I'm knowin that they wish me hell
Yo get a real job, rappin doesn't pay the rent
I hate the studio cause that's where all my money went
Never surrender, it's all about the faith you've got
Don't ever stop, just push it til you hit the top
And if you drop, at least you know you gave your all
Be true to you, and that way you can never fall
But beware, these backstabbers ain't no joke
Just like a rope, they hang on you until you're broke
And when you're broke, they move onto the next dope
And there you are, can't even pay your car, nope
And when you reminisce, thinkin how you got dissed
remember how it felt, and then remember this
Be true to you, believe that there's no one bigger
Cause they can all suck dick - it's strictly for my niggaz
KANE_6969
11-17-2003, 09:16 AM
i'm studying somputer programming at purdue...i doubt i ever use the degree thoguh
what can i say tanya yoru the kinda girl who leaves a mark your hard to forget
KANE_6969
11-17-2003, 11:59 AM
Tanya i just wanna say i find you very interesting :)
Tanya
11-17-2003, 12:01 PM
Hopefully U Mean That In A Good Way=)
KANE_6969
11-17-2003, 12:04 PM
well how did you take it cuz thats definantly hwo i meant it ;)
Tanya
11-17-2003, 12:05 PM
I Dunno Why Don't U Elaborate=)
Tanya
11-17-2003, 12:06 PM
Btw I Dropped Jones For Mountain Dew Lol
KANE_6969
11-17-2003, 12:10 PM
do the dew hehee e;aborate.. wellthe cheating on drinks was funny thats why i remmember it.and the blue screen.. totally anti bil gates. thats sexy...well i am not goo at beating around the bush.. but it was definantly meant in a good way ! hwo can i elaborate mroe than that..you like your job ?
Tanya
11-17-2003, 12:16 PM
Lol Im The Best Black Jack Dealer Around
KANE_6969
11-17-2003, 12:32 PM
i bet you are! you;d be a gr4eat goodluck charm to have :P
-$HaWn-
11-17-2003, 01:38 PM
Wickedly lickety shot Spickety spickety split lickety
-$HaWn-
11-17-2003, 01:55 PM
Now tell me - what the **** is this man?
Niggaz doin brothers in worse than the Klan
Can't even stand, in front of your buildin and chill
without yieldin, twelve-year-old children that kill
blood spillin, thugs be illin, unnecessary slugs
fillin the sky, usually drillin the one
that wasn't willin to die, yes sir in the Killing Field
I got my, life preserver
And I'll do my time for murder, these niggaz got the nerve to
question me - bout the colors that I got on?
Now see that red dot on your knot
Bout to get your whole crew shot on
A Soldier of Fortune, I'm the wrong ***** to plot on
Took him out on the spot before he even got on
my hitlist -- peep this
I cock back, you bow down
Bust round, bloody the ground, retaliation sounds like this
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